Thoughts of spring... and other poetry

[Eric]

Wow i love to write at school  just typed this little one now

Time is Money

Is time money?
Can it be funny?

It's all on what you spend,
because then you ask to lend.

Foresight the need of change,
because you might be in the red range.

From your first credit cark and check,
well then what the heck?

Is time money?
It is never meant to be funny.

LOL!  Wonderful!  That's the attitude we should all have about money! 

[P71nnacle]

The choice of words, such a lovely affair,
You can feel the expression, it's all right there,
With each word put to pen
The only question's when
You'll have one more poem to share.

(wrote that on the spur of the moment )

[Eric]

The choice of words, such a lovely affair,
You can feel the expression, it's all right there,
With each word put to pen
The only question's when
You'll have one more poem to share.

(wrote that on the spur of the moment )

Very clever! 

As you can see, I've been writing for a while now...

[Zach]

Written by me today explaining my current situation at home 

Rollercoaster Ride

When you want to be bright,
but your parents don't think it's right,
Something is up.

When something is up,
but it doesn't seem tough,
Everything is down.

When a child goes down,
what light yonder hits town to them?

This is I, the chosen one.
My parents hate it when they can't have fun.
Fun to them is depression too me,
but to them arguments all are a breeze.

Disfaction is guarunteed,
when a child can't feed to light.
The light is hungry, but evil lingers.
And doth evil gains, thus light becomes sorrow.

Here I try to defeat thy evil,
thou thus fear never opens,
and may light be seen soon enough,
when the chosen one is beyond tough.

[Eric]

Well written.  I think many people (myself included) have experienced that at one time or another.

[Mike M]

Well written.  I think many people (myself included) have experienced that at one time or another.

I sure have, for a long time.