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Other => General Discussion => Topic started by: Eric on September 08, 2010, 12:06:58 AM
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春 (Haru)
The warm sun rises
Lights up the world and my soul
Spring has come again!
Birdsong fills the air
Flowers’ fragrances so sweet
Everything reborn
Smiles and happiness
An optimistic outlook
Spring has come again!
7 September 2010
Billerica, Massachusetts, USA
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Very nice :)
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Very nice :)
Thank you! :)
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You weren't kidding that you were the poet around here. It looks good to me. :yes:
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You weren't kidding that you were the poet around here. It looks good to me. :yes:
Thank you! I have some more nature/weather-themed poems. Maybe I'll post one or two here or there... :)
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Clouds
What shapes do I see in the clouds,
Forming amongst these airborne shrouds?
Covering the sky, floating past
Each one more unique than the last
Nature's rich imagination:
An expression of elation
Creativity unsurpassed
The sky: a canvas deep and vast
As if molding a lump of clay,
Nature takes some time out to play
The wind sets the clouds into place
As thick as stone, as light as lace
29 June 2008
St. Petersburg, Russia
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I listen to the raindrops
And the whispers through the trees
I feel the joy of sunshine
And the darkness speaks to me
The starshine sends its greetings
As the clouds go floating by
I'm glad to hear the thunder
And the singing of a stream
The birds, they sing a chorus
The air so bright and fragrant
Living in a care-free world
And I've just been invited
What is it that you're saying?
And what am I meant to know?
Please teach me how to listen
And show me where I should go
15 May 2007
St. Petersburg, Russia
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One autumn night
One lonely night
I'm walking down the street
Alone, as usual
But then I stop
Through fog and haze
I think there's someone here
I run over to see
Just emptiness
Empty city
Leaves blowing in the breeze
The whole world is sleeping
Except for me
Turning the block
Darkness pierces my soul
Birds sing in the distance
And fly away
A cold wind blows
The rain begins to fall
Puddles in the sidewalk
I just walk on
One autumn night
Romantic, for lovers
And I'll walk forever
Just to find you
21 September 2006
St. Petersburg, Russia
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If you have a bunch of poems, maybe you should devote one thread to them rather than making many topics for each one.
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I'll keep that in mind. But don't worry... I won't make posting them here a regular thing. Actually, after what I've already posted, I'm probably done. :)
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If you have a bunch of poems, maybe you should devote one thread to them rather than making many topics for each one.
Patrick is right. I enjoyed your poems very much but please try to keep topics to a minimum. Thanks ;) I merged the topics for now. I hope you don't mind too much. If you can think of a good title to let folks know you can replace the one I made up real quick in your original post.
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Looks good to me! Actually, if I had thought of it, I would have put everything in the same topic, too. Thanks!
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Amazing poetry. :clap: :happy: I applaud your work.
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Amazing poetry. :clap: :happy: I applaud your work.
Thank you very much!
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Wow i love to write at school :bleh: just typed this little one now :)
Time is Money
Is time money?
Can it be funny?
It's all on what you spend,
because then you ask to lend.
Foresight the need of change,
because you might be in the red range.
From your first credit card and check,
well then what the heck?
Is time money?
It is never meant to be funny.
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Wow i love to write at school :bleh: just typed this little one now :)
Time is Money
Is time money?
Can it be funny?
It's all on what you spend,
because then you ask to lend.
Foresight the need of change,
because you might be in the red range.
From your first credit cark and check,
well then what the heck?
Is time money?
It is never meant to be funny.
LOL! Wonderful! That's the attitude we should all have about money! :clap: B)
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The choice of words, such a lovely affair,
You can feel the expression, it's all right there,
With each word put to pen
The only question's when
You'll have one more poem to share.
(wrote that on the spur of the moment :) )
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The choice of words, such a lovely affair,
You can feel the expression, it's all right there,
With each word put to pen
The only question's when
You'll have one more poem to share.
(wrote that on the spur of the moment :) )
Very clever! :biggrin:
As you can see (http://www.gotpoetry.com/Poems/l_op=Showpoet/poet=ericdn.html), I've been writing for a while now...
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Written by me today explaining my current situation at home :(
Rollercoaster Ride
When you want to be bright,
but your parents don't think it's right,
Something is up.
When something is up,
but it doesn't seem tough,
Everything is down.
When a child goes down,
what light yonder hits town to them?
This is I, the chosen one.
My parents hate it when they can't have fun.
Fun to them is depression too me,
but to them arguments all are a breeze.
Disfaction is guarunteed,
when a child can't feed to light.
The light is hungry, but evil lingers.
And doth evil gains, thus light becomes sorrow.
Here I try to defeat thy evil,
thou thus fear never opens,
and may light be seen soon enough,
when the chosen one is beyond tough.
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Well written. I think many people (myself included) have experienced that at one time or another.
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Well written. I think many people (myself included) have experienced that at one time or another.
I sure have, for a long time. :yes: