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Other => General Discussion => Topic started by: ilovemikebettes on October 14, 2008, 07:36:25 PM
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This is a sad song I wrote about my dead kitten yesterday.
Tell me if you like it.
"Lost Void"
Painted butterflies fly,and they fall.
I don't know why they all fell on the same porch.
It's so sad to see them all gone,just like you.
(Refrain)
That night,I knew it was trouble.
The killer said it needed to be done.
I got out,when you saw.
Now,life is in black and white.
Like an unfinished painting.
The bottom of the world never seemed so grey.
Cloudy is the main mood.
It's no wonder the sky doesn't show us the beauty today.
(Refrain)
That night,I knew it was trouble.
The killer said it needed to be done.
I got out,when you saw.
The lost void...you were my joy.
Now the thoughts of good times brings me sadness and inside joy.
(Refrain)
That night,I knew it was trouble.
The killer said it needed to be done.
I got out,when you saw.
Sometimes the waterfalls visit me.
Sometimes I get a feeling of gulit because it could have been avoided if I was there
to save you.
But,I was away.
At least I said "goodbye".
But,you never lived a full life.
Yet me know if my music makes you :cry: or :clap: or if it's :thumbdown:. :yes:
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That was a good song! Yeah it's sad I didn't know your cat died. :(
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Thanks for the positive feedback,and she had to be put to sleep because of head truama in July 10 days before I joined here ("the killer said it needed to be done").
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Very nice song indeed! I'm very sorry to hear that your cat died though.
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Very nice song!!
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Thank you,thank you. :happy: I'd sing but I am a bad singer.
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I am a good singer. I have a barratone voice in my choir class. my voice may sound a bit girly but i have deep singing voice. xD
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I used to sing pretty good, then my voice got too deep. :P
I can sing good for a short while, but then I start losing my voice if I sing for too long.
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I can't really sing the high notes with out going into a screech mode. I wrote a long song last night that's weird.