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My Scripted Series
« on: September 03, 2011, 04:54:27 PM »
Ok, here goes my second attempt at this, hopefully the post button won't be a FAIL on me this time.  <_<

A few times over the past couple of years, I shared a few of my scripts here of my scripted series I've been writing for the past 8 years since I was 10 called "Stuck On Stoop-id" in the Front Porch/Pot Belly Stove threads, but since several constant discussions take place there, I thought it might be better to place them in a separate thread. If any admins. feel differently, I'll go back to posting them there at seldom times of the year.

Since Labor Day is coming soon, I'm posting this episode since it begins on Labor Day. (It's only mentioned to be Labor Day in the slug lines of scenes in the first act.)


Episode Description/Season Three Episode 36 - Daniel’s Outrageous Birthday [CODE NUMBER - S3136]
It’s Labor Day, but it's also Daniel’s 32nd birthday and since he’s never been to Chuck E Cheese’s as a kid, the family plans to hatch that part of his lost childhood for his birthday. While there, Daniel receives a phone call from an old ex friend from high school whose opening his 4th theme park in the country in Kansas City. When he opened his 1st park, Daniel and he were partners that went their separate ways. Rick tells him that he still has an old stock from that park that’s worth millions of dollars now, but if he doesn’t get to Washington D.C in 1 day to claim ownership of it, Rick is planning to railroad Daniel by buying out his stock. Can Daniel get to DC in time to claim what's rightfully his?


There's an original and cleaner version (removed the mild/strong language) of this episode attached below.

Also back in November 2009, I posted a fan fiction episode of my series that revolved around The Weather Channel, due to the episode not being updated since then and there being 3 departures of OCMs I used in that script, I'll probably post an updated version here when I get around to it. Jim Cantore and Heather Tesch will remain in the script unchanged.

Alexandra Steele (Lines to be replaced by Crystal Egger or Julie Martin)
Kevin Robinson (Lines to be replaced by either Chris Warren or Eric Fisher)
Nicole Mitchell (Lines to be replaced by Maria LaRosa)


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Re: My Scripted Series
« Reply #1 on: September 08, 2011, 10:52:53 PM »
TWC Fan Fiction episode redone, about 80% of this is new material than the original script I posted here back in November 2009.

The following OCMs are featured:
Jim Cantore (Mr Nice Guy to Not so Mr. Nice Guy)
Paul Goodloe (One line)
Crystal Egger
Chris Warren (Despises Daniel)
Eric Fisher (One line)
Carl Parker
Heather Tesch (Involved in a catfight w/ Maria)
Maria LaRosa (Obsessed with Daniel)
Todd Santos (One line)
Dr. Greg Forbes
Stephanie Abrams & Al Roker (referenced in jokes)


Season Five Episode 95: The Day After The Weather Sucked
(Daniel saves Kansas City's very own famous news reporter Nick Owens in a hostage situation, but he accidently ends up putting the local news station's meteorologist out of commission for 6 weeks. Daniel ends up being his temporary replacement and ratings skyrocket sending Daniel on a warm front to success when his journey lands him at The Weather Channel. Unfortunately, he has a 100% chance of making enemies, friends, an obsessed fan and did I mention a slight chance of making more enemies?)



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Re: My Scripted Series
« Reply #2 on: October 02, 2011, 06:29:00 PM »
14. Tales of Terror I – Halloween Special

E-Mail Stalker - It’s Halloween and Daniel is getting more of a trick than a treat when he realizes the girl who has been sending him e-mails and madly in love with him is from his ex-girlfriend Gwen! Daniel lies about Gwen stalking him to keep from hurting Kara, but eventually she finds out, soon the two devise a plan to despise of Gwen for good.


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Re: My Scripted Series
« Reply #3 on: November 10, 2011, 10:39:51 PM »
I just realized tonight I started this thread without posting character descriptions of the main/secondary characters. The list has been updated tonight attached below.


Also for those who read this, I need help on choosing a new story title. The current one now I'm not liking as much as I used to. Right now I have:

Stoop-idly Misguided Family
Stoop-idly Misguided
I'm With Stoop-id
Stoop-id Is As Stoop-id Does
Home Sweet Hell (Previous story title)
Overland Park (Suburban area outside of Kansas City)
KC (Short for Kansas City)

« Last Edit: November 11, 2011, 05:08:15 PM by Weatherlover »


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Re: My Scripted Series
« Reply #4 on: November 16, 2011, 02:49:20 PM »
I like Stoop-idly Misguided Family :yes:

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Re: My Scripted Series
« Reply #5 on: November 16, 2011, 03:11:56 PM »
I like Stoop-idly Misguided Family :yes:

Thank you for the feedback Mike.  :happy:


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Re: My Scripted Series
« Reply #6 on: November 16, 2011, 04:33:50 PM »
I like "Stoop-idly Misguided Family" and "Stoop-id Is as Stoop-id Does," but if I had to pick one, it would proably be the former. :)
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Re: My Scripted Series
« Reply #7 on: November 23, 2011, 09:24:34 PM »
Starting with this episode, my series is being retitled Stoop-idly Misguided Family Happy Thanksgiving guys! :wave:


Season Five Episode 88. The Motherly Wife for Thanksgiving (Revised Title)
(Norman is heartbroken about spending his first Thanksgiving divorced and estranged from his ex wife and children. Since the divorce, he sobs and weeps on every Tuesday night, the day he and his wife parted ways.  In an effort to not have his Thanksgiving holiday ruined by Norman's manic depression, Daniel plays matchmaker by hooking up his sister-in-law Farrah, who just recently broke up with her boyfriend on a date with Norman. The date goes surprisingly well and leads to well...a one night stand which only happened because Farrah dared Norman to be more exciting and spontaneous instead of boring and safe all the time. The relationship blossoms so quickly that Norman and Farrah secretly leave Thanksgiving dinner to elope! That is unless some person or persons object to the decision first...)



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Re: My Scripted Series
« Reply #8 on: December 25, 2011, 11:38:25 PM »


The Stoops Get a Computerized Home for Christmas
(The Stoop family attends a Robotboxing tournament at the Scifi Convention which Melody wins a surprise grand prize. Meanwhile, Kara tries to crack Daniel into buying a new computer as a Christmas present for the entire family, but Daniel has other plans when he decides to sign up for an experimental Computer Home instead. Everyone enjoys having the computer home meet their every needs except Kara who feels she's being replaced. When Kara tries to convince Daniel to shutdown the computer for the holidays, "Paul" as he is named does everything he can in his power to stop that from happening. Once "Paul" is shut down completely and the family finds out Melody's surprise grand prize was ironically a new desktop computer, Daniel goes on a rant about how computers are evil and soon the family joins together to destroy their new desktop computer while enjoying the rest of their Christmas holiday.)


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Re: My Scripted Series
« Reply #9 on: January 27, 2012, 11:16:04 PM »
Dean Rough Draft Sketch

Age 13
DOB: November 1998 (As of 2011)

I know the shoes look weird, but as I mentioned before I'm not the best drawer and it's hard for me to try and draw in great detail that small. If it's hard to tell they are supposed to be Nike's. I'll probably change em to a different brand of shoes in my final draft. (Perferably something more simplistic for me to draw that's recognizable. :P)






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Re: My Scripted Series
« Reply #10 on: February 28, 2012, 10:23:21 PM »
These are what I call holdover ideas/episodes, there's a 50/50 chance I will or won't ever write them, in fact some of them I'm not sure are that great to begin with. What do you guys think?

Ana’s True Beauty
Ana is coaxed into entering a teen beauty contest on a dare by her siblings. That becomes the easy part, the hard part becomes of whether or not she can handle the overwhelming amount of divas who surpass in her way to prevent her from winning.

All That Saxy Jazz
As a part of their once a month family weekend outing, it’s Dean turn to choose somewhere for his family to spend their Saturday afternoon and he has chosen for them to attend a Smooth Jazz Festival which the entire family grumbles at the thought of, but it has a surprising effect on Daniel who quickly becomes a fan of the genre.
NOTE - This would be a fan fiction type episode, I already know I would want to write it to include Joyce Cooling and Jeanne Ricks in it, but anyone else I'm not sure yet.

8 Simple Rules for Dating My Gay Teenage Son
Daniel becomes overprotective of his son Dean dating his shy, reserved, yet rebellious friend Rocco, but Dean takes his overprotective behavior as him treating him like a third daughter rather than a son.

Tales of Terror IX
Invasion Of The Gender Swappers - While vacationing in the Caribbean, the Stoop family discovers a mysterious stone that they removed from it’s ancient grounds and ultimately as apart of the curse their genders are swapped around. The women hate being trapped in the guys bodies, but Daniel and Jason aren’t so quick and ready to reverse back. 

Pandemonium - Dean suddenly disappears after having a nightmare about someone in his family being possessed by the devil. Daniel is hypnotized by Professor Copernicus to go into his dreams to find his missing son, once he does and brings him back to reality, another shocking twist is revealed.

Secrets of the Sacred Jaded Phoenix
Rodney and Daniel's boss Captain Beamington years ago discovered an ancient treasure chest labeled as the "Jaded Phoenix" while fighting in the Vietnam War. They both including a friend who was with then when they made the discovery decided to take the treasure chest back home with them and bury it, never to be touched, all agreeing that only the last one of the three living would have the privilege of basking in it's unlimited wealth. Rodney and Captain Beamington receive news that their friend has died, giving Beamington the opportunity to do everything in his power to get rid of Rodney so he can secretly have the treasure to himself.

Stoop-idly Misguided Experimenting Tactics
After an unfortunate skateboarding trick slip up lands Jason flat onto a male student’s lips, he questions his sexuality. So he starts experimenting to straighten (no pun intended) out his confused feelings, but Dean thinks it's an immature act of mockery, accusing Jason of not entirely being accepting of the fact that he has a gay brother.

A Tale of Two Divided Parties Among City Limits
This episode flashes back to November 2008 election day as Barack Obama becomes President-Elect, which is exciting news for the Stoops, but upsetting news for some of their conservative friends who were supporters of McCain. The bad political blood runs deep within the town where a fiery town hall debate leads to drastic action leaving the town to be split in half: liberals on one side and conservatives on the other.

A MidWinter Night’s Nightmare
Chaos and madness erupts between couples in this episode as they are mix matched with the wrong love at a Valentine’s Day party.

Were Back In Business!
After Mr. Beamington leaving town from the tornado fiasco, Daniel and his friends are left jobless, until Daniel gets the idea to start his own carpentry business and hire his friends to work for him.

It’s Hard to Say Goodbye (Series Finale Episode - This episode will be written obviously)
Daniel gets a call from the President that he wants to appoint him Secretary of Defense in his administrative cabinet. Daniel is excited about the offer, but he along with his family have mixed feelings on moving away from their home of Kansas City to the nation's capital. After some time to contemplate, the Stoops decide to make the move to the East Coast, saying a tearful goodbye to their friends as they ride away in the sunset.


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Re: My Scripted Series
« Reply #11 on: February 28, 2012, 11:36:55 PM »
I think they're all pretty good ideas. :yes:
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Re: My Scripted Series
« Reply #12 on: February 29, 2012, 08:45:16 AM »
Thanks, I'll probably post some more soon. :happy:


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Re: My Scripted Series
« Reply #13 on: March 05, 2012, 06:41:15 PM »
Out of the nearly 8 1/2 years I've been writing this series, I did something rather unorthodox. This is the first episode where the entire first draft wasn't written but instead typed right off the bat. I think I'm going to start doing that more often so I don't have to draft it out first in a spiral notebook. I'll stick to doing my episode outlines on paper though.

Season 8 Episode 178 - Senior Graduates (Season Finale)
Special Code Number - S825178

EPISODE SYNOPSIS - Rodney, after 47 years, receives a letter from his old high school that he didn’t technically graduate high school along with some of his other friends when they were drafted into the Vietnam War back in 1965 and they will have to make up a credit of a class they weren’t given to receive their official diploma. Once Rodney and his friends enter back into the high school world their behaviors quickly change to where Rodney is acting like a 17 year old again rather than a 65 year old and Rodney's son Daniel is suddenly acting as the authoritative father figure over Rodney.


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Re: My Scripted Series
« Reply #14 on: March 10, 2012, 02:56:31 PM »
That was great! :thumbsup:
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